commentary

Your commentary should identify: 1. The research question 2. Thesis 3. strenghts of the paper (both style, i.e., writing, and substance i.e., logic, resources) 4. weaknesses of the paper (both style, i.e., writing, and substance i.e., logic, resources) 5. what suggestions you have for improvement. (both style, i.e., writing, and substance i.e., logic, resources) There’s two paper each one write about 450 words, for this two assignment please use very simple and very easy english, do not delivery a high quality paper, just give a bad paper, just write the basic point on both paper, do not go specific, and give some general suggest, don’t write the paper good